Sample Reading Journal for Perfect Example

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What you noticed

Why do you think it’s important?

Belmont Harbor

“fuck”

Ha ha – I remember doing that in high school. If you curse at the pillow you still get mad and feel macho without getting into any real trouble.

 

Belmont Harbor

“Come on, Porcellino, you pussy” “Fuck you, Brad”

It seems like I’m just obsessed with vulgarity, but honestly, I love it. It’s a perfect representation of high school dialogue – I already like this more than American Splendor.

Belmont Harbor

Poppers

I wish Porcellino had included a little more internal monologue in this – it would be interesting to see what he actually thinks about Tina’s use of drugs. That kind of thing would have scared the pants of me at that age.

Belmont Harbor

“I wish…” soul-rising?

What is that? His soul raising or his wish or something? I don’t understand this part…

Haircutting Time

“John you’re acting like a real asshole lately”

Does his mother really talk to him like that? I can’t tell if this is teenage false memory for effect or if they really speak to him this way…

Haircutting Time

No more real than shadows…

Ahh, the poet laureate of 11th grade…I remember thinking I was very profound, too. Sadly, these “realizations” are clichés that every kid pretty much realizes. Although I’m beginning to wonder if John has a problem with depression…

Haircutting Time

Even happy things are somehow sad.

This is something I can relate to – there are different ways to look at everything. I don’t fully understand depression – I get depressed and bummed but I sort of feel that feeling depressed is self-perpetuating…I like the picture of the dog on the floor.

In-Between Days

We made complete jackasses of ourselves but it was ok

I feel like this a lot…almost that if I’m not making a jackass of myself I’m being boring. I could probably try a lot harder if I don’t look like a fool.

In-Between Days

I thought we all thought drinking was stupid…

I remember this exact moment in high school. I was one of the first guys in my group of friends to try drinking but shortly after we agreed it wasn’t worth the risks (rules-wise, not health risks). The moment when I discovered other people were doing that and other drugs was very disheartening. Abandoned.

In-Between Days

Now I was really confused… (last page)

Tell me about it. Didn’t John just ask that other girl out? Lita seems like a nice girl and a friend oh John’s that is really going to get hurt because he is settling for her. John seems like a good guy but I don’t know what kind of decision he’ll make here…

 

 

 

4th of July

Columbo in the background

I like this aspect of Perfect Example a lot – it really does make it the perfect example for teenage experience. Many people remember certain aspects of specific scenarios like that.

4th of July

Fred gives Kristi a ride home

This goes against everything in the Bro Code, which I have had discussions about earlier this semester. I’m disappointed in Fred and sad for John – it seems like Fred is doing his best to rub it in.

4th of July

“I had decided I was going to kill myself”/John’s freak-out

It’s odd – even though John clearly didn’t kill himself I was nervous. When he flipped out on the front door, I think that was healing for him. Sometimes it’s important to just cut loose and scream. It’s therapeutic.

Celebrated Summer

Lita

Have they been dating for a while? It seems like she hasn’t been around for a while but I’m not sure how much time has actually passed…I’m glad at least that John recognizes the potential power to hurt he has in his hands, and that he’s scared of abusing it.

Celebrated Summer

Bridge Over Troubled Water

I still try to be clever like that…

Celebrated Summer

Epiphany

This is what I was waiting for in American Splendor. Some real overhaul of his way of thinking that shows he may become a better person. John’s depression may not be “cured” but he at least has recognized a major source of his own pain.

Celebrated Summer

I want to live, I want to be happy, I want to be alive. (the end)

Way to man up, sonny. I’m proud of this kid I don’t know who is now a man old enough to be my father…regardless, I admire the moves he made in his own life.